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Canon
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Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
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50 mm
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1600
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Mar 14, 2009, 5:06:41 PM
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picnic with butterfly by hoschie picnic with butterfly by hoschie
I don't know which version looks better.

A kind of cyber picnic on an abandoned place :-)

Version 1:focus on the model and warm,soft colour...
Version 2: focus on the place, cold and with noise(from ISO 1600)

Model: theDeFormity :iconthedeformity:

I like both versions but I'm curious to know which version do you prefer?
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:iconsnowwolfsabertooth:
snowwolfsabertooth Featured By Owner May 20, 2010
i like the first one better, the second one feels like, it's a documentary picture or something - like it is just realistic showing the texture of the place
Both are great, i guess they tell different stories
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:iconcarolinecherry:
CarolineCherry Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010  Professional Photographer
If I had to choose one I'd say the bottom picture becuase the colours feel more...right, lame as that sounds.

They're both fantastic in any case.
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:iconmuzaker:
MuZaKeR Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
the upper one is better
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:iconthebrokenunknowngirl:
TheBrokenUnknownGirl Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the 2ed one but It should be more close up like the first
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:iconteirrah1995:
teirrah1995 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Both of them, but bottom.
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:iconmagooalou:
Magooalou Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
I prefer the top version over the bottom. ^^
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:iconanorexicchihuahua:
AnorexicChihuahua Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009
Both of them are good, but i would have to say the top, since it focuses on the model.
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:iconcabanaeclipse:
cabanaeclipse Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009
Hmm, I agree that the first one is better focus wise, but I really like the cool colors in the second one. Well done! =)
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:iconthefaboulusme:
TheFaboulusMe Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2009
I prefer the first one,, it focus on her,, and not on the place where she is...
But nice photos both!!
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:iconwyldangl:
WyldAngl Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009
I personally prefer version 1. To meh it looks better to have the model more in focus instead of the background area.
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:iconkyuketsuki:
kyuketsuki Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009
Either version will do, it depends on your intention. I would suggest you be much more worried about the cloth that the model is on. It looks awful when the rest of the image is so nice. It would be very simple to PS out the cloth as long as you take into account the scaling of the noise. Once you take care of that I think you will be golden no matter which one you use.
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks for this inspiration ! :-)
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:iconanimafreak666:
animafreak666 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
If the bottom was as close as the top i'd like it better, the colder one makes her paler and adds emphasis to the neon
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:iconhyperdelirium:
hyperdelirium Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
I like the bottom one better, though they're both great.
The bottom one has... more of a cool feeling, which I think fits with the picture a little bit more. Has a little bit more of a lonely feeling...
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:iconsmuzliprof:
smuzliprof Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
i like the first one better if I have to choose:)
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:icongothic-kitten:
gothic-kitten Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
I like the second version best
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:iconllovelace:
llovelace Featured By Owner May 11, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
ich mag das untere mehr! :)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Vielen Dank für Deine Meinung =D
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:iconstarlit1211:
starlit1211 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
I like the warmer one. :)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks for letting me know =D
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:iconklaireyfairy:
klaireyfairy Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1st 1:)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks for letting me know =D
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:iconklaireyfairy:
klaireyfairy Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome xx
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:iconveryangelic:
veryangelic Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the first one better - the warm colors and the background make a nice contrast with the model :)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much for your opinion =D
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:iconsleepyrivet:
sleepyrivet Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
I like the first one more because you can see the contrast better and the model is clearer. She looks more natural and less washed out. Also since you have the butterfly I think it helps with a more natural look. The background looks better in the second one, but I think that would be solved in the first with a wider shot to place the setting better.

I really like this a lot, very imaginative.
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks a bunch for your opinion!
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:iconmandieh:
Mandieh Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009  Student
definitely the first one.. you can see the background & surrounding things in the 2nd one and my focus wasnt on the model at all.
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much for your opinion!
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:iconangrymarshmallow:
AngryMarshmallow Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
this is so awesome i love the model!
and all the colors on her <3
I like the first one more :)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much for your kind words and your opinion =D
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:iconmffythegreat:
MFFYthegreat Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist
I like them both, but I like the yellow tint of the lighting in the first one. The second one makes the model's face look a little washed out. And I like how in the first one the background around her is not as focused, it creates creates a better contrast between her and the background and it makes you want to focus on her more.

That little butterfly is adorable!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Wow, thanks a lot for your very helpful opinion!
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:iconmffythegreat:
MFFYthegreat Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist
No problem! :D
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:icono0akyia0o:
o0AkyiA0o Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
i like the top one better.
great image though. :)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks a bunch for your opinion =D
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:iconsilenceisscary:
SilenceIsScary Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
I can see why you like them both, they're both great pictures!

but my eyes seem to keep getting atracted to the upper one. :)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much for your opinion =D
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:iconl30n:
l30N Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009
the model should be the focus of the picture, so i like the first better. the second has too much noise for my taste, but still good nonetheless.
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks a lot for your very helpful opinion =D
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:iconmememanci:
Mememanci Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009   Photographer
top
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks :-)
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:iconmissrosiemay:
MissRosieMay Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009   Photographer
this is amazing :D
i do prefer the top one tho
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:iconsuzkie:
suzkie Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
the top one gets my vote. good work on both :)
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:iconportraitinblack26:
PortraitInBlack26 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Student
I like both, but personally i think the top one is better, it makes the place feel warmer.

brilliant work (:
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks :-)
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:iconshadowyume:
ShadowYume Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Personally like the bottom one better, but both are really good. Once again, excellent work!
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:iconginchen:
Ginchen Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009
I like the first one.
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:icondraconis-wyrm:
Draconis-Wyrm Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009   Writer
I LIKE THEM BOTH AUGH.


I think they're both good, and for different things. For example, I'd use the second one as a desktop (model is smaller, architecture is nice, like from a story), but give the first one as a gift (warm and neat, reminds me of dreams).
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:iconiluvwritin:
iluvwritin Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Student Interface Designer
I enjoy the first one better :]

with the focus on the model and the warmer colors.
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