Very funkadelic use of a busy pattern and a cleverly wrapped package in camouflage. I like the contrast of black and white stripes and the white background. Your lighting is excellent as always, and your models quite originally charming in their attire.
The simplicity of the stripes is a good counter to the more elaborate pattern and makes the model pop out distinctly against her background--while her surprise package is cleverly hidden in an apparent optical illusion.
However that busy pattern seems to make the eyes hurt at smaller resolutions. As a larger print I think it would likely solve the potential for eyestrain, as compared to viewing on a computer screen!
Honestly, these women can't put out what they really want. Their faces don't look very good, even if their body atones for it. But their outfits, and sitational um situations XD are quite nice. This is a good picture, but the model makes it wrong. She doesn't seem right for modeling. Just my view.