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April 20, 2009
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Make
Canon
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Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed
1/100 second
Aperture
F/7.1
Focal Length
49 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 14, 2008, 2:09:45 AM
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Hidden gift by hoschie Hidden gift by hoschie
The best way to hide your gift :-)

Model: :iconophelias-overdose:
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:iconniniriaz:
Critique by NiniriAZ Apr 23, 2009, 11:53:04 AM
Very funkadelic use of a busy pattern and a cleverly wrapped package in camouflage. I like the contrast of black and white stripes and the white background. Your lighting is excellent as always, and your models quite originally charming in their attire.

The simplicity of the stripes is a good counter to the more elaborate pattern and makes the model pop out distinctly against her background--while her surprise package is cleverly hidden in an apparent optical illusion.

However that busy pattern seems to make the eyes hurt at smaller resolutions. As a larger print I think it would likely solve the potential for eyestrain, as compared to viewing on a computer screen!
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:iconthebrokenunknowngirl:
TheBrokenUnknownGirl Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
this is wayyyy coollll
I love the aspect and the box idea
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:iconnovemberrain85:
NovemberRain85 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
*stats critique*


Honestly, these women can't put out what they really want. Their faces don't look very good, even if their body atones for it. But their outfits, and sitational um situations XD are quite nice. This is a good picture, but the model makes it wrong. She doesn't seem right for modeling. Just my view.
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:iconpictwii:
Pictwii Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
the outfit and the back ground are really awesome, the nails are really freaky.
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:iconcalander:
Calander Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
I almost didn't see the gift, great concept.
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
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:iconkombinat:
kombinat Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:#1:
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
=D
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:iconartificialxkisses:
artificialXkisses Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009   Traditional Artist
Oh, what a cool concept!
Ophelia looks great, as usal, and the finger makeup was clever!
Great job...love her stalkings! 8D
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
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:iconbjg123:
bjg123 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009  Student General Artist
stunning
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009  Professional Filmographer
:-)
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:iconbjg123:
bjg123 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009  Student General Artist
^^
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:icondjake:
Djake Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Not only is this well done from a technical aspect, but I can tell you had some fun with this piece! Nice work!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thanks :-)
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:iconchainsawsurgery:
ChainsawSurgery Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Professional General Artist
Awesome! This is what I was planning to do for my final show at college! (Wallpaper with the same pattern stuff in front of it!)

Is it possible for me to use this picture in my work?

Many thanks,

Rosie :)
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:icontillhelmina:
tillhelmina Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009
WOW. genial Idea! Beautiful photo!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
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:iconcaribbeansushi:
CaribbeanSushi Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
MINDBLOWING.
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you =D
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:icontoxicangel13:
toxicangel13 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
I want those boots!...and most of the rest of that outfit come to think of it...
Great shot!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you =D
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:icontoxicangel13:
toxicangel13 Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
you're welcome ^^
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:iconkattragique:
KatTragique Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
omg. Ophelia is loooove! :heart:
and OMG. I loooove her hands/fingers/nails! They're just so amazing!!! :D
and hahaha, well yes! that IS the best way to hide a gift =P ... lovely shot, and lovely outfit too!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D She will be happy to hear ;-)
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:iconkattragique:
KatTragique Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha yaay! and no problem! =P
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:iconsleepyrivet:
sleepyrivet Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
I always love your work, so please don't take this the wrong way when I say this is a very weak picture compared to what you have done in the past.

I like the idea a lot, but I think there was too much focus on the correct placement of the package that it took away from the placement of the model. She is a wonderful and beautiful model, but in this picture she seems very awkward and out of place. I think a more effective picture for this type of idea is to have the shot be waist up and the main background is the paper. Have her be more mystified by the disappearance of her package with a closer focus on her face. Also, with a closer shot you can see the package more clearly, and you can match it to the background so it can also stay quite hidden.

Anyways still great work, I look forward to seeing more.
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Wow, thank you so much for your kind and very helpful critique! A lot of people always write how great this or that picture is but just a few people take the time to take a deeper lock on the picture. Thanks for that, this is what helps to become better :hug:
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:iconsleepyrivet:
sleepyrivet Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
No problem! I am glad to hear it helps! :hug:
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:iconlengkyx:
lengkyx Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
that's hilarious! :lmao:
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
=D
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:iconcellee:
cellee Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009  Student Digital Artist
loved the photo,
and her outfit is just PERFECT! *-*

;*
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
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:iconthebiggest:
thebiggest Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
I actually love this picture, its very riviting. I think the way she's been positioned, and her expression- everything is perfect!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
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:iconpunkgoddessofdesign:
PunkGoddessOfDesign Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
AMAZING picture. Where did you find her boots? i want them very much!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
The best way to know where she buys her shoes is to write her a note. She is so cute and nice, I think she would love to help you!
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:iconlunafaekeyi:
LunaFaeKeyi Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
Gorgeous, Ophelia looks amazing
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Nothing to add =D
Thankies =D
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:iconavatarlogan:
AvatarLogan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
Love the dress!!! Hair rocks and the nails are great too!!!!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
My girlfriend bought those nails in a cheap-shop for 10Cent :giggle:
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:iconyukkabelle:
Yukkabelle Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009  Professional Photographer
So genius :wow:
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
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:iconpolka-dotty14:
polka-dotty14 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009   Photographer
I really needed to concentrate where actually was the gift...it was complicated..:S But really nice:)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
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:iconnidadin:
NidadiN Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
Haha! That's awesome!
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
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:iconkarateangel:
karateangel Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
i didn't even see the box she's holding at first, but i guess that's the whole point! :XD:

awesome work. :)
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:iconhoschie:
hoschie Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much =D
Yeah I took the picture time ago and found it on my fixed disc and my first thought was: "Where is her arm" :giggle: So I fooled myself ;-)
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:iconkarateangel:
karateangel Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
hehe! you're welcome! :D
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:icontwoforflinching:
Twoforflinching Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
*Giggles* Makes me eyes twitch. Really great image.
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