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:phew: A lot of work is done and the final step is done: My first digital portrait is colored :boogie: I used the same coloring technique as in the cat picture I've painted in 2006
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I have learned the technique I've used from one tutorial of the fantastically gifted Henning Ludvigsen :iconhenning: (I love his stye maybe because it looks a little like the oil paintings of my idol Boris Vallejo :worship:)

I'm a little (OK, a big... :roll:) perfectionist I have to confess. So there is one mayor spot at the picture which makes me a little... :angered: THE EYES, Ophelias beautiful eyes looks a little.. I don't know... maybe incorrect? You see I did not even have a word for that.
Nevertheless I am so thankful for all your great and constructive critique so far. It was so helpful and if there is someone out there who exactly know what there is wrong. I have spent hours in the try to correct the eyes by pushing them around (interesting suggestion isn't) and after some time I did not seen a different even if I put one eye on the cheek :rofl:

I think I need more practice and not to forget: practice! Uhm did I mentioned that I need more practice?


Model: Ophelia overdose :iconophelias-overdose:

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:icondarkness-inside-me:
This looks BEAUTIFUL!

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:iconxxmii:
Just perfect!

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:iconvestachan:
It's gorgeous. =] I think the problem is that the eyes are different sizes. If you enlarged or shrank one I think it might help.

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I'm fuckin' homoerotic- I mean adorable.

You agree, don't lie.
:iconfemketje:
great colours

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:iconthaonlymoonchild:
This is absolutely gorgeous, also considering that you don't work digitally very often(or so it seems) O__O whow!

I think what looks weird about the eyes is that they're not on the same level(the pupils, that is).So she seems to be looking in 2 different directions, in a way.

But all in all this is totally amazing, especially her hair and skin. I have to look at that tutorial :)

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So Amazingly Beautiful! Just like her.

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You know, the artist themselves are their biggest critique. ;) The rest of us think it looks fine. I get the same way about my art, I see all these little imperfections that none of my friends see.

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outstanding sir
im sure Boris Vallejo would be proud to have you as a fan

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:iconkattragique:
Oh! simply lovely!

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